MICA GD 200.01
Thursday 9am-3pm, Brown 305
Instructor: Ryan Clifford,
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Sunday, October 10

Eraserhead



Two more for eraserhead

2 comments:

  1. Your second one captures the tone of the movie and still follows your clean aesthetic. The textures are great. The flatness of the first poster works against the concept; you don't get quite the depth that you do in the second poster. I also prefer your type choice in the second. I'd just finesse your type hierarchy. Right now, I read the bottom line before I read "dusk 'til dawn film festival". Nice job.

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  2. Great improvements, lovely solutions.

    2nd is the clear winner. I'd work with the hierarchy just a bit more. the diagonal slashes might work better as vertical slashes. Watch the weight, they seem a bit heavy.

    See how your type works printed out at full-size. This really looks good, color will really make this compelling.

    Great job.

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