This is working better, but you have too many colors. With white, black, red, and the paper color, you're up to 4 colors instead of 3. Can you think of a different solution for the tagline though? Conceptually, it's unclear why it's placed there. Also, I would try using "lining figures" instead of "old style" numbers. You should be able to find the lining numbers under Type > Glyphs in InDesign. I'm suggesting this because the 3417 sticks out on the bottom line because it sinks below the baseline.
This is working better, but you have too many colors. With white, black, red, and the paper color, you're up to 4 colors instead of 3. Can you think of a different solution for the tagline though? Conceptually, it's unclear why it's placed there. Also, I would try using "lining figures" instead of "old style" numbers. You should be able to find the lining numbers under Type > Glyphs in InDesign. I'm suggesting this because the 3417 sticks out on the bottom line because it sinks below the baseline.
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