The second option on the top right of the posters is working really well. I'd look at pulling the type and cityscape down on your composition so it isn't so centered in the space, but otherwise, this is looking good.
Have you tried using a green shape block behind the car, with black halftone for the car? I think it needs to pop a bit more.
I also like the top right option. You could also try to cut out the windows of the car and have the black of the sky showing through. Be careful that you don't have an imaginary horizon line with where the stars become visible (maybe erase a few of them so the line isn't so concrete). Also, small thing: Bengies Drive-in is on Blvd.
The second option on the top right of the posters is working really well. I'd look at pulling the type and cityscape down on your composition so it isn't so centered in the space, but otherwise, this is looking good.
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Great work on this, strong improvement!
I also like the top right option. You could also try to cut out the windows of the car and have the black of the sky showing through. Be careful that you don't have an imaginary horizon line with where the stars become visible (maybe erase a few of them so the line isn't so concrete). Also, small thing: Bengies Drive-in is on Blvd.
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