Definitely well-considered. You're just in the tinkering stage, and you've created a consistent style for your visuals throughout. A few small things to consider: - Is your list of "Memorable Meals" redundant if all of the meals also appear in the graph above? - Do you need to spread the weekdays out more in the graph so it is more clear which meals are part of which days? If you eliminated the list of memorable meals, you could change the y-axis label to something like "Relative Satisfaction of Memorable Meals" and free up some space. - The line to the right of the fried plantains in your graph looks thicker than the other lines in the graph. - Typo in "parmesan" - Lastly, in the upper left, you might need to indicate that the 24.5/10 is the total amount spent since it's under the heading for the daily breakdown. The stripe that you've brought in is the only place in your piece you've introduced a pattern. It might be too dense, since I find myself looking more at the stripes than at the dollar amounts within the white pictograms.
Definitely well-considered. You're just in the tinkering stage, and you've created a consistent style for your visuals throughout. A few small things to consider:
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- Do you need to spread the weekdays out more in the graph so it is more clear which meals are part of which days? If you eliminated the list of memorable meals, you could change the y-axis label to something like "Relative Satisfaction of Memorable Meals" and free up some space.
- The line to the right of the fried plantains in your graph looks thicker than the other lines in the graph.
- Typo in "parmesan"
- Lastly, in the upper left, you might need to indicate that the 24.5/10 is the total amount spent since it's under the heading for the daily breakdown. The stripe that you've brought in is the only place in your piece you've introduced a pattern. It might be too dense, since I find myself looking more at the stripes than at the dollar amounts within the white pictograms.
Great job pushing this.