I prefer the strength of Elvis Costello's name when it doesn't have "& the Attractions", but think it's too much of a doodad when it's in the lens of the glasses. Maybe it's the bottom version but "& the Attractions" has "and" spelled out so the text would have to be reduced? Maybe a thinner weight or different font entirely than the bold voice you're giving Elvis Costello. The shape of the glasses is nice. You could try aligning it so that the left and right edges hit right underneath the edges of the text (you have a subtle curve inward now that I find distracting).
I prefer the strength of Elvis Costello's name when it doesn't have "& the Attractions", but think it's too much of a doodad when it's in the lens of the glasses. Maybe it's the bottom version but "& the Attractions" has "and" spelled out so the text would have to be reduced? Maybe a thinner weight or different font entirely than the bold voice you're giving Elvis Costello. The shape of the glasses is nice. You could try aligning it so that the left and right edges hit right underneath the edges of the text (you have a subtle curve inward now that I find distracting).
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