Your 4th and 5th options are working better for me. The lipstick doesn't really go with the movie, and the tiny zombies are too small to decipher. Your secondary information can get a lot smaller, and I question the font you're using for your title -- the letterforms aren't invasive or bold enough to reflect the fear in the woman's scream. I would keep the date with the address information, and try a different place for the tagline (in her mouth on an angle is a nice idea you had explored earlier). Have you tried leaving the title together and pushing the secondary information below it?
Your 4th and 5th options are working better for me. The lipstick doesn't really go with the movie, and the tiny zombies are too small to decipher. Your secondary information can get a lot smaller, and I question the font you're using for your title -- the letterforms aren't invasive or bold enough to reflect the fear in the woman's scream. I would keep the date with the address information, and try a different place for the tagline (in her mouth on an angle is a nice idea you had explored earlier). Have you tried leaving the title together and pushing the secondary information below it?
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