Be careful of your halftones, they aren't reading correctly right now. Are you using the halftone and saving as a bitmap .tif?The title is working better, the typeface for the secondary information still feels very coarse and strong in comparison.
I agree with Ryan's comments on the typography. The title is looking much better, but the secondary info is still difficult to read and doesn't fit the mood of the title. Your images could be a bit crisper. I'd play around with the dot-frequency to get the best relationship between the 3 textures you're using.
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