This has shown nice progress. The biggest head is competing for my attention with the hair tangle. This might be because the composition is pretty evenly spaced out. Is there a way to give the head more prominence? Also, it's a bit awkward that some of your text intersects the diagonal line but other parts don't. Maybe try pushing "Dusk til dawn film festival" to two lines and put it on the right side of the line as well? That might add a sense of uneasiness to the composition.
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