It's difficult to get a sense for the layout and tone of the piece when there is such minimal data being explored. As a result, you've relied on larger green background shapes to fill this empty space. Be consistent about whether your pictograms are breaking out of their containers or not. The clothing pictogram seems too visually dense right now, as does the bag of money for your overall pictogram. Think about if the use of green is too expected for the color of your piece, and reference some of the cool things that GOOD and your classmates have been doing for inspiration. Looking forward to seeing the final.
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