MICA GD 200.01 Thursday 9am-3pm, Brown 305 Instructor: Ryan Clifford, ryan.d.clifford@gmail.com, 410.340.8636, Office: Brown 316 GTI: Aura Seltzer, aura.seltzer@gmail.com
Thursday, October 14
Candace edit
I messed with all of the elements. I feel like it's fine but I've been looking at it for a while and probably don't see somethings. Please let me know if you have any ideas to make it better. Thanks.
Your hand lettering was working better for me than this digital type for the movie title (which seems too expected/cliche). I still have the same thoughts on your secondary type - I think it should be simpler and not digitally distressed. I would see what grounding the hand closer to the bottom of the poster does for the composition instead of keeping it centered.
Color and contrast work well in this. I'd still suggest moving the date into your secondary information, and having the hand reaching up to the slogan instead.
Your hand lettering was working better for me than this digital type for the movie title (which seems too expected/cliche). I still have the same thoughts on your secondary type - I think it should be simpler and not digitally distressed. I would see what grounding the hand closer to the bottom of the poster does for the composition instead of keeping it centered.
ReplyDeleteColor and contrast work well in this. I'd still suggest moving the date into your secondary information, and having the hand reaching up to the slogan instead.
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