This poster needs a photographic halftone, as per the project requiremets. This is purely illustrative.The hair illustration has potential, and the letter is starting to work for the film title, but it does not have any photographic elements.
The integration of the title into the hair with your hand-lettering is nice, but I would recommend using a typeface for the secondary information so it doesn't detract from the title (it also pops out more because it's white). Think of ways you can include something photographic related the movie. Right now, your concept is purely visual.
This is an awesome illustration, but you are missing some key ingredients.
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